Talk:Oni Foxandez The 3rd
Needed an editor. Badly.
Right-o. I'm guessing this page was made by the subject. Frankly, the spelling was terrible, and there were absolutely no stops in the entire article. I fixed it up a bit, though it is still difficult to understand in some places. You may want to alter your phrasing a bit.
It is recommended that date of birth be provided rather than the subject's age at the time the article was written. This saves everyone the trouble of updating the age every year. Birthplace and/or current location are also generally provided. Try looking at other articles about people as references. ;)
Cheers. ~Rafiel Loch