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<p>142.104.250.115: </p> <hr /> <div>This article seems neutral enough to me. It states facts, not opinions, and--given the nature of the source material--there's no way said facts can be cited.<br /> <br /> I have personally verified the accounts documented here with the creators/administrators of [[LylatRPG]] who have kindly provided me with logs of the events detailed here and elsewhere.<br /> <br /> At the very least, it should be stated that [[Kala McCloud]] is not affiliated with LylatRPG, and that any claim she places on the intellectual property of others is absolutely false. {{unsigned|142.104.250.115}}<br /> <br /> :The problem I have with the article (and why I marked it as POV) is mainly the sentence ''In retaliation, she quit the game only to return as a player and has since been trying to wrest control from the development team.'' If that were removed or a citation were provided, I'd be a lot happier about the overall tone of the article. --[[User:Dmuth|Douglas Muth]] 21:01, 28 September 2006 (UTC)<br /> <br /> :Oh, now that I think of it, one way to provide a citation would be if you placed the logs that you had on the web somewhere, perhaps with a page that summarizes their contents. We could add that page in as a reference, and I think that would be sufficient for the article. --[[User:Dmuth|Douglas Muth]] 21:02, 28 September 2006 (UTC)<br /> <br /> :I've gone ahead and meddled with the article to remove certain phrases that may bring its neutrality into dispute. If the LylatRPG administrators wish to make the logs public domain and cite them, I've told them that they are free to do so, though, after speaking with them, I doubt they're all that interested in airing dirty laundry. {{unsigned|142.104.250.115}}</div>

142.104.250.115 //en.wikifur.com/wiki/Talk:Kala_McCloud 2006-09-28T20:02:42Z

<p>142.104.250.115: </p> <hr /> <div>This article seems neutral enough to me. It states facts, not opinions, and--given the nature of the source material--there's no way said facts can be cited.<br /> <br /> I have personally verified the accounts documented here with the creators/administrators of [[LylatRPG]] who have kindly provided me with logs of the events detailed here and elsewhere.<br /> <br /> At the very least, it should be stated that [[Kala McCloud]] is not affiliated with LylatRPG, and that any claim she places on the intellectual property of others is absolutely false.</div>

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