Talk:Whiteflame

Higgs Raccoon, would you be willing to tell me what more I should do to this article to "clean" it up other than add internal links to other articles in the wiki?
 * Glancing at it, the writing style needs a little work to match the formal tone preferred in articles. (Looking at other articles should help here.) A casual tone is best kept for your User Page, as are things like hopes and future plans. Emoticons are a no-no. The article also needs internal wikilinks for key words like "therian", "Second Life", etc. Including a list of links to any external webpages you have (LiveJournal, Fur Affinity, etc) is a good idea.--Higgs Raccoon 23:37, 25 June 2010 (UTC)
 * Okie, I will fix it. I have a tendency to inject joviality into things where it doesn't belong. I apologize.
 * PS I hope you don't mind a little humor before I edit it. ;-)