Talk:Jaie Davis

I've added the cleanup template to this article as the closest match--it's not quite a copyedit matter. "Current" should be replaced with "as of" or "since" such and such a date. Wording needs to be more formal. Statements such as "his love for percussion was sparked" are flowery and vague. I tmight be worth copying the bio section to Jae Davis' user page before tweaking with the section in the article. -- Sine 22:28, 10 January 2007 (UTC)