Talk:Hex

I've added the cleanup template to this article. Various things: The image needs to be thumbnailed (and preferably reuploaded with a meaningful filename). There should be a general description as the start of the article, (Hex is an x from y who does some things) before getting into sections and specifics. The section titles should be lowercase after the first word. Age should be as of, or, even better, with birthdate. A lot of the wording needs to be trimmed and made more formal, "Hex is an avid, if not flagrant, self-proclaimed gun nut" is an example of an inappropriate, "fluff" phrasing. -- Sine 20:59, 9 December 2006 (UTC)