Talk:Pleasure Bon Bon

I'd like to help on improve this page, but I'm a newbie of wiki editing and I need some guidance. I read the Book of Style, but I didn't get what are the part of this article not correctly wikified. Can someone give me some details so I can understand what to fix ?


 * Here are some suggestions I can make from a quick glance:
 * The plot summary should be made concise.
 * The plot summary should not comprise the bulk of the article; the Patreon sections should be expanded and more information about the comic should be added from a real-world perspective (for example, its original publication in Vixen and its migration should be expounded upon).
 * Speaking of the Patreon sections, they should be merged into one section.
 * External links should not be placed in the body of the article.


 * If you have any other questions or need any help, let me know! --Equivamp - talk 16:36, 14 December 2016 (EST)

Thank you very much ! They are really good points for me to start on. I'll work on them.