Talk:Quilrynn

So I see my page has been marked for cleanup. Tell me what needs improving, as Wikipedia's style guide has poofed. --JKM, 13:12 6/26/06


 * Hmm... I don't see any major issues with the article. You might want to ask User:Sine, as he was the one who added the cleanup template.  --Douglas Muth 18:55, 26 June 2006 (UTC)


 * Well, I'm not Sine, but I can definitely see some room for improvement to make this article more "encyclopedic". As an example, the sentence "Hir beginnings, like most furry backstories, are long and angsty, which shi is sure nobody wishes to hear unless pressed." is pretty useless - it tells the reader nothing and should be cut entirely (IMHO). There's a couple more sentences and phrases like that; if I get time later today I'll take a whack at this.DuncanDaHusky(talk) 12:09, 27 June 2006 (UTC)