Talk:Sketch Dalmatian

Neutrality of the part alleging sexual assault is questionable; "Meanwhile, the folks at livejournals sf_drama sincerely hope..." seems very NPOV --GingerM (Leave me a message) 05:35, 12 January 2011 (UTC)


 * I've had a go at cleaning this up, and making the language more neutral. I should note that I've removed the reference to "masturbating on her feet" because I can't find an unambiguous comment by the parties involved which indicates that that part actually happened. The way the FA journal reads, the "desacrated my body" thing might have occurred when Sketch was back in bed alone rather than on the floor with Rose.
 * And with that most sensational claim removed, I admit I'm a little unsure if it's the sort of thing that goes in a WikiFur article.--Higgs Raccoon 12:58, 12 January 2011 (UTC)