Hi there, Darrien, and welcome to WikiFur! Thanks for telling us a bit about yourself. However, the current article seems to have been copied and pasted from a character description from a role-playing game, as opposed to being written in an encyclopedic style. This makes the article less useful for our readers.
Specifically, the text has a large number of lists with facts and features, as opposed to complete paragraphs of prose. While we welcome information about your character, there is a lot of descriptive writing that goes into detail that may not be that useful for the reader, which might be better hosted on your own web page ((WikiFur is not a web host). The article also lacks a coherent introductory section, and any information about the player behind the character (although this last point may be intentional, and there is no requirement for such information).
For examples of good articles and good introductions, check out our list of featured article front page entries - most often, the summary on that page comes from the start of the articles. If you need help with improving your article that is not provided elsewhere, feel free to let me know, or ask on the discussion page. :-) --GreenReaper(talk) 08:58, 30 September 2007 (UTC)