Hi there, Ben! While I disagree with your initial approach to improving the Secret Moon article, I would nevertheless like to welcome you to WikiFur. I hope that you will find it a fun site to read and edit. :-)
I'm confident that Crassus and yourself can work something out that's at least acceptable to you both. We're always willing to help as well, so if you feel that the truth isn't being represented fairly, give us the evidence that shows that and we can look at that and make our own minds up about it. Ultimately, that's what readers of the article will do, as well - we simply strive to give them the best evidence the best presentation with which to do so.