I want to ask anyone, if can fix the grammar and ortographic errors. I tried to do the best, but english isn't my naive language, and I know my grammar sucks. Thanks for all =) --DragonTrainer - Flamewars aquí, por favor. 23:22, 20 January 2008 (UTC)
First revision by me
Okay, I just read through the article and fixed some clear writing and syntax errors, this was no big problem at all. In the character description the characters were called either "he" or "she", but often "it" was used as a follow up in the same description. I changed those "it"s to either "he"s or "she"s to preserve consistency. Now to the hard part: There have been parts, like at the beginning the description of the "insensitive" humor of the comic, which were, and maybe still are, quite hard to understand. I tried to clear the meaning up a little as good as I could. The problem is, I don't understand the comic as I don't speak the language (spanish), thus I cannot read the comic and I don't know if I understood the meaning of every sentence here myself. Thus I tried to change things a little bit to clear it up, if I did understand anything wrong and made unneccesary or wrong changes, please forgive me and correct them. I tried my best, but maybe someone else should also read the article who understands spanish as well as english fluently. Hope I could help a bit. Greetings, RealZero 12:23, 24 March 2008 (UTC)
- Thanks for the help. I'll look for help for doing what you are saying. Greetings. --DragonTrainer - Flamewars aquí, por favor. 19:55, 24 March 2008 (UTC)
A question, the creator of this strip is the same d-t of the ekas portal? i ask because i saw some pics of this character in there... he's a pokefan and have lots of pokemon vore pics.—The preceding unsigned comment was added by 22.214.171.124 (talk • contribs) .